Devereux's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[revest]

errrm....

this does have a lot of potential, it could be a really good song. However can you not hear that the guitar is out of tune, and you're playing quite far out of time?

You're getting the three because the ideas are good, and the potential is there...but you need to sort out the guitar

NeverHundred responds:

I have spent many a long night revising this song before I realized that the guitar is not actually out of tune, but all the other instruments are out of tune! The shock and horror!

[Just a new loop]

made me smile =)

sounds a bit like a song from Lemmings...but that's a good thing!!
only problem is there's like half a second of silence which makes the looping awkward, apart from that...brilliant!!

Genraltweet responds:

I'm glad it made you smile :)

I didn't think of that but yeah it does sound a little like Lemmings.
I don't have the full Fruity loops program because I don't have the money for it so I only have the demo version :( so I don't know how to make that awkward second go away. But thanks for the review!

[[Cyn] By the Shore]

really good, but not really ambient...

it is too fast to be ambient, both in tempo and the parts. However it is still an awesome, especially the synth part at 2.33 I think. Your programming is amazing, must've taken a long time programming. One small criticism is the synth choice...it's a little too Owl City for my taste, but then again that's just me!

Cynus responds:

Yeah, it took a long while for me to get the sounds I wanted for the synth lead.

And also it's not ambient I know, but it's very chill for my music.